Comments on: Writespiration #51 The Last Time https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=writespiration-51-the-last-time Books, Business and Bad Words Tue, 04 Aug 2015 08:49:01 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.0 By: TanGental https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4131 Tue, 04 Aug 2015 08:49:01 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4131 In reply to Sacha Black.

Thanks S

]]> By: D.G.Kaye https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4130 Mon, 03 Aug 2015 22:56:20 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4130 Good for you for standing your ground Sacha. Although, I hope you’ve found a way to go back to playing for your own enjoyment. 🙂

]]> By: Hugh's Views and News https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4129 Mon, 03 Aug 2015 15:43:13 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4129 In reply to Sacha Black.

I just remembered what you once said to me after I told you that one of my short stories was crap! Point taken 🙂

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4127 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:10:09 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4127 In reply to TanGental.

ooh, thats a bit twisted! I like it. Love the two sides of this, the hope and then a dark ending… 🙂 thanks Geoff.

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4126 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:08:30 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4126 In reply to Hugh’s Views and News.

aww Hugh – I love this. I thought you said yesterday it was crap. It’s not at all. I particularly like the ending/last line after all that nicest a twist at the end.

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4125 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:07:29 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4125 In reply to Keith Channing.

Thanks I will come check it out 🙂

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4124 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:07:14 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4124 In reply to macjam47.

hahaha fired him! I love that he had the balls at 7 to do that 😀 he just became my hero!

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4123 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:02:16 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4123 In reply to Ali Isaac.

Wow, you have a habit of writing such emotionally powerful flash. I love this. and I love the ending.

]]> By: Sacha Black https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4122 Sun, 02 Aug 2015 10:01:08 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4122 In reply to D. Wallace Peach.

I know. It’s outrageous that teachers do things like that. I just hope that things have moved on and that doesn’t happen any more.

]]> By: TanGental https://sachablack.co.uk/2015/07/29/writespiration-51-the-last-time/comment-page-1/#comment-4121 Fri, 31 Jul 2015 21:54:24 +0000 http://sachablack.co.uk/?p=2616#comment-4121 For 20 months I’ve relied on others to move me around, dress me, feed me. I’ve screamed but no one heard, I’ve cried but no tears have come. And then my prayer was answered; a miracle cure, a way out from inside myself. A blink, a smile, ancient wasted muscles screaming back to life. The last time I needed help to care for myself, I was handed a key to a flat; my own home. That was the last time people visited, the last time I had a conversation with some one who cared for me, the last time I felt wanted, loved. It was the last time I felt free; now my body is free but I am trapped.

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