To prologue or not to prologue that is the question… with @Marjorie_Mallon #Sundayblogshare

Today I have a wonderful guest on the blog, Marjorie Mallon. I met Marje at the very first ever Bloggers Bash – have you got your ticket yet? Marje has attended every single bash and I am absolutely thrilled to have her on today to discuss prologues to celebrate the launch of her first book and paperback.

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Welcome Marje:

To prologue or not to prologue that is the question…

There has been considerable debate whether writers should bother with prologues. Do readers read them? Or are they likely to skip merrily on to Chapter one? Should I have elected to begin my debut YA Novel, The Curse of Time Book 1 Bloodstone with a prologue?

Recently, I discovered an author I have not had the pleasure of reading before, New York Times Bestseller Jay Kristoff. I read his YA novel Nevernight and had one of those perfect reading experiences. His writing is effortless, exciting, sexy and intriguing. I could scream and shout to tell you how wonderful it is.

The aspect of his writing that made me utter a silent hurrah is his use of an opening warning, a Caveat Emptor, Epilogue, and final Dicta Ultima. Thank you Mr Kristoff, if opening Caveat Emptors and Epilogues are good enough for Jay Kristoff they are certainly good enough for me! In his case he’s sneaky; he doesn’t prologue. He hoodwinks his readers into believing that his ‘prologue’ is not a ‘prologue’ at all by using the Latin term Caveat Emptor which means ‘Latin for “Let the buyer beware,” and he follows his epilogue with a Dicta Ultima, that is so perfect it makes you want to weep. A Dicta Ultima is ‘a final pronouncement from an authoritative source.’ Jay Kristoff certainly has a dark sense of humour and I love that. He must have known that a bare-bones prologue would have put him in grave danger of being overlooked! So, instead he made his opening a spectacular warning! How clever.

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Now, this leads me to further debate. Mr Kristoff probably likes prologues but prefers not to call these little, irksome devils by the term prologue. Shall I follow suite and call my prologue something else? A swear word. A Latin word. Perhaps unwise, it sounds a bit presumptuous copying Mr Kristoff!

In my experience prologues are heinous, difficult creatures, but loveable nevertheless. They are a huge challenge and writers embrace challenges like lovers. I struggled through several re-writes in book one until I found the right style and voice for my prologue. My initial attempts were awful; I wrote two versions to begin with, the first in the voice of the Creature of The Cottage. This didn’t feel quite right but helped me to understand the Creature’s character better. Writing is never wasted! Then, I tried a conversational style using my main protagonist, Amelina as the focus. After several re-writes it started to sound right. My intention was to lead the reader into the story using a conversational style and chapter one flows forward from this ‘atmospherically, creating a whimsical effect.’ I added a five line poem at the beginning of each chapter to add interest and intrigue. Of course, the epilogue was a challenge too but not so much as that darn prologue.

This masochistic desire to begin my narrative before chapter one continues…

Recently, I submitted a first draft of my prologue for book two to my critique group–Cambridge Writers and suffered quite a battering.

The advice ranged from–you should use three or four intriguing lines (five of which were highlighted on my draft,) to do you even need a prologue? I considered my options, I could stamp it to death, stab it to shreds, (whilst crying ‘maws teeth,’) an expression from Nevernight, or I could get a grip, consume a large glass of wine, and do a bit of research.

I drank the wine and did the research.

I agreed with my fellow authors at Cambridge Writers that the five lines highlighted were good first draft sentences to begin the punishing process of re-drafting.

Here they are, be gentle with me they are first draft babies:

What can I tell you?

Dad’s changed.

Mum’s changed too. She’s all smiles.

I miss Esme so much. Where has my imprisoned sister, the mirror girl gone?

The next one is a bit different but I like it!  Yeah, I like cats!

Shadow my cat has been doing this weird happy dance,

chasing his tail until his whiskers are all dizzy.

I can’t bear to leave these five lines or Shadow alone in sorrowful isolation. Ah, deliberation, deliberation. So, I picked up my copy of Jay Kristoff’s Nevernight and discovered that he began withthree amazing lines surrounded by lots of other lines that really grabbed my attention by the jugular:

‘People often shit themselves when they die.’–The first line. This really isn’t nice but gets to the point in so few words. 

‘be advised now that the pages in your hands speak of a girl who was to murder as maestros are to music.’ – The warning!

‘I think that’s why I loved her.’  – The last line.

How interesting. The first line is shocking and the final line taken in isolation could make the story so different. Between the first and the last line there are several paragraphs. It’s not a tiny prologue, but neither is it a long prologue.

So, I’ve made my point, beginning your novel before chapter one can work! Prologues, Caveat Emptors, Dicta Ultimas and Epilogues rock! Yay!

My writing luck is in; I have discovered an author that can write an amazing beginning and ending too. Writing is a craft, purposeful reading is compulsory to a debut author’s progression. I reckon with a little help from Jay Kristoff my prologue for book two will be magnificent! Who knows he might just read this…

In the meantime, until Mr Kristoff discovers me, his protégé, (a girl can dream!) I will struggle on, re-writing because MJ is no quitter! If you hear me cursing, it will be my alter ego MJ calling my humble prologue a name…

It won’t be polite or in Latin!


Book Blurb:

The Curse of Time – Book 1 – Bloodstone

Fifteen-year-old Amelina Scott lives in Cambridge with her dysfunctional family, a mysterious black cat, and an unusual girl who’s imprisoned within the mirrors located in her house. When an unexpected message arrives inviting her to visit the Crystal Cottage, she sets off on a forbidden pathway where she encounters Ryder, a charismatic, but perplexing stranger.

With the help of a magical paint set, and some crystal wizard stones she discovers the truth about a shocking curse that has destroyed her family’s happiness.


Author Bio:

I am a debut author who has been blogging for three years at my lovely blog home Kyrosmagica .My interests include writing, photography, poetry, and alternative therapies. I write Fantasy YA, middle grade fiction and micro poetry – haiku and Tanka. I love to read and have written over 100 reviews here.

My alter ego is MJ – Mary Jane from Spiderman. I love superheroes! I was born on the 17th of November in Lion City: Singapore, (a passionate Scorpio, with the Chinese Zodiac sign a lucky rabbit,) second child and only daughter to my proud parents Paula and Ronald. I grew up in a mountainous court in the Peak District in Hong Kong with my elder brother Donald. My parents dragged me away from my exotic childhood and my much loved dog Topsy to the frozen wastelands of Scotland. In bonnie Edinburgh I mastered Scottish country dancing, and a whole new Och Aye lingo.

As a teenager I travelled to many far-flung destinations to visit my abacus wielding wayfarer dad. It’s rumoured that I now live in the Venice of Cambridge, with my six foot hunk of a Rock God husband, and my two enchanted daughters. After such an upbringing my author’s mind has taken total leave of its senses! When I’m not writing, I eat exotic delicacies while belly dancing, or surf to the far reaches of the moon. To chill out, I practise Tai Chi. If the mood takes me I snorkel with mermaids, or sign up for idyllic holidays with the Chinese Unicorn, whose magnificent voice sings like a thousand wind chimes.

You can find more about Marje here:  Website, Collaborative blogTwitter My Facebook Authors/Bloggers Support GroupGoodreadsFacebookInstagram



  1. Interesting question, Marje. I prefer to start reading at chapter one but if there is a prologue I’ll read it just in case it’s crucial to understanding something in the book.

  2. Very interesting Marjorie. I haven’t thought of that part for my book yet. (Baby steps)
    I always read prologues in a book but I don’t really notice when there isn’t one. But thinking about it, I actually like them. But you’re right, not any old prologue will do!

  3. Not too long! I have used a brief prologue to set the scene for a gentle family drama, while in another novel I plunged straight in, wanting the reader to have no idea what was going on. I think it depends on the novel and the author, but we should be able to get the reader quickly invoved if we do write a prologue. An introduction that goes on for pages will put most readers off. Just the first four lines, ending with ‘I miss Esme so much.’ would entice me in; something has happened in that family and I want to find out what!

    1. Oh, thank you for that. Yes I think I will definitely keep it short. I don’t imagine a long winded prologue will achieve anything especially in a YA book. Thanks so much for commenting and for your advice. 🙂

  4. Hi Marje! Great topic and you tackled it marvelously. I always read the prologues, if the book contains one it’s an integral part of the story. George R.R. Martin is also a genius writing prologues. Very interesting and well-written article! 😀

  5. A think the point about a prologue is, it has to serve a purpose, like to offer an enticing bit of information that is useful to know before the story starts. If it’s just an excuse for a load of backstory, it generally falls flat.

  6. Great post, Marje. I think prologues are perfectly fine as long as they make sense to the story. If the structure doesn’t need one, by all means, don’t add it just for the fun of it (I think this is how prologues got bad raps). But it there’s a good reason, include it!
    Thanks for the wonderful guest post, Marje and Sacha!

  7. I like your sense of humor, Marje, It breathed life into a dry (bitterly debated?) subject. I read prologues and introductions if they’re short. Prologues that are long enough to be a prequel irritate me 🙂 Kudos for tackling this aggravating topic ❤

  8. I read this with great interest, Marje. The first critique of my new book, While the Buzz Bombs Fell suggested a prologue for background. I wrote this in and sent the book to the next reader. Charli Mills gave me wonderful advice and suggested that I incorporate this detail into the first chapter by way of dialogue. I have done that and am very happy with the results. I suppose it is all a case of how best to get the reader involved in the story right up front.

  9. This was such an interesting post, and lots of great points Marje. I have actually written prologues to some of my work, because I truly felt like it was a necessary piece before beginning the book. But I’m one of those people that doesn’t read them! I know, I know, I’m a hypocrite HAHA but this post says a lot of the things I think, from both sides of the spectrum. So thank you for this!

    1. Hi Shaina. Thank you for joining in the discussion. It would be interesting to find out who reads the prologue in my book lol. Perhaps I should do a poll! I even mentioned it to my mum (who is a keen reader) and she says she doesn’t read prologues either. Mum! Lol.

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